This is complete perfection! I've noticed that a lot of times your characters don't have nipples which I think is a beautiful and haunting touch. It makes them seem so otherworldly and emphasizes the long stretch of smooth skin on their chest. I really love it!
A new serum eradicates the illness An old man rises from his wheelchair When suffering unknown attacks the painless And common animals are becoming rare
As water spins in circles twice Spiders, snakes and the little mice Get twisted around and tumble down When Nature calls we all shall drown
If the earth is dying of a growing thirst Rain shall fall on dried out soil And every kind of bud shall burst A sough of relief to insects - turmoil
As water spins in circles twice Spiders, snakes and the little mice Get twisted around and tumble down When Nature calls we all shall drown
Beautiful work, love her bridging the natural and the manufactured sides ( the white line registered as the top of a wall to me), you have other wonderfully disturbed works in your gallery but this is my favorite
Great concept. I just have one little critique the white line is defining both respective sides of the compositon. However I wish it were a t different color it distracts from the overall beauty of the piece. Perhaps a shade of gray to blend it. Just a thought. Beautiful dev!!!
Thank you for the feedback! Well, I tried some different colours before I released it here, but I somehow wanted it to stand out, so the upper half breaks through the clear separated concept. Anway, thank you, I always appreciate critique!
Tiamat- 1994 - Wild honey
A new serum eradicates the illness
An old man rises from his wheelchair
When suffering unknown attacks the painless
And common animals are becoming rare
As water spins in circles twice
Spiders, snakes and the little mice
Get twisted around and tumble down
When Nature calls we all shall drown
If the earth is dying of a growing thirst
Rain shall fall on dried out soil
And every kind of bud shall burst
A sough of relief to insects - turmoil
As water spins in circles twice
Spiders, snakes and the little mice
Get twisted around and tumble down
When Nature calls we all shall drown